Wednesday, 26 June 2019

 Maui and the Big
Fish 
This is the story of Maui and the Fish. One day Maui’s brothers wanted to go
fishing in the  morning. Maui said that he wanted to go but his brothers didn’t
want him to go. The brothers didn’t want him to go because they did not recoin
he would catch anything.


So the next night he wove a strong rope and was going to us his mother's jorw
bone and that's what he would use to catch the fish. Then he snuck into his
brothers woka. Then the next morning his brothers got into their woka while
Maui was hiding in it. When the brothers got to the fishing spot Maui jumped out
of his hiding place. He said i’ll show you i’ll begin with a karder kea. 


Then he through his hook into the water then he waited and then felt a tug on his
line.Maui said help me don’t be afraid help me the  brothers jumped onto the
jainet stingray and started hitting it with their spears.


That jainet stingray today is the north island of New Zealand.


The End

By Luke, Regan and Dom

3 comments:

  1. hi i´m doing FF and FB so FB I really licked your story and it was like I was reading the real maori legend. FF maybe you could could add a little more because the real story had a little bit more that you left out. By Koda

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  2. Hi I'm Troy from ahipara school I really liked your story. It sounded great. I think you could have added in a bit more.
    Keep up the great mahi!





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  3. Hi my name is Mackley from Awahono School. I love the story I think it is very good. Maybe next time you can add a little more writing. You can come and see my blog. kind regards Mackley

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